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« Reply #17 on: June 30, 2011, 04:34:10 am »

When placing peppers on the ground, the phrase, "its ready to be hollowed" or similar appears. It should be "it's". It is. Its implies ownership.

Fixed.  Thank you for finding this.

Nicodemus placed Canopy Magazine in a  Outhouse

Am I correct in saying that there is one too many spaces between 'a' and 'Outhouse' ?
Also, shouldn't it be 'an outhouse' instead of 'a Outhouse'?

Fixed.  Thank you for reporting this.

Another:

After using honey fungus on flowers.  When you mouse over the funginated flowers you get this:
x% Dieing Red Tulip

'Dieing' should be 'dying'.

Fixed.  Thank you again.
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« Reply #18 on: June 30, 2011, 04:52:50 am »

The scythe does a great job and cutting down x stalks for you.
Remove the 'and'.

Fixed.  Thank you for reporting it.

5:30:52 am Sir Ispep Teid failed to manufacture Workbench. (Odds: 16.29% - 20 metal pieces wasted) 
5:30:47 am Sir Ispep Teid manufactured Workbench. (Odds: 16.28%)

a workbench.

The same correction on both lines please.

Fixed, thank you.

You place your shiney new Table..

*shiny
*table

I fixed shiny.  Thank you for reporting this.

I can't fix the capital letters on the objects because of a coding reason, sorry.
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« Reply #19 on: June 30, 2011, 10:27:02 am »

Can you not run a tolowercase function on the text? Or is that slightly too wasteful - or simply not coded that way...
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« Reply #20 on: June 30, 2011, 05:41:39 pm »

I should have reported this yesterday, but for some reason I didn't notice it:

After applying honey fungus to flowers, in yellowish text up by the ticker it reads:

'It appears to already be dieing.'

Change dieing to dying. 

I have debated with myself as to whether to suggest or not to change the wording of the phrase.
Ideas that I had were these if they interest anybody:

"The flowers appear to be dying."  or  "The flowers appear to be withering."
Somehow the current phrase dosen't sound quite right.   Huh
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« Reply #21 on: July 01, 2011, 05:42:16 am »

Can you fix my typos in IRC?  I need it REALLY bad.  Or is iy badly?
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« Reply #22 on: July 01, 2011, 08:37:43 pm »

When you drop your Water-filled Pumpkin while using it on a patch of flowers the very last word should be Oops but it is Ops.
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« Reply #23 on: July 07, 2011, 10:25:52 pm »

"You smelt the ores into a soft bar. It smells of pumpkin. Why was someone in cooking in the furnace?"

remove the extra "in" after someone
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« Reply #24 on: July 25, 2011, 12:58:58 am »

When watering pumpkin patches and you drop your pumpkin it says Ops at the end. I think its supposed to be Oops
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« Reply #25 on: July 25, 2011, 01:13:04 am »

When giving blue sapphires to Toadee in his house and he gives you his story there is coding that is visible at the bottom of the story that he gives you.  Perhaps that shouldn't be visible?
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« Reply #26 on: August 14, 2011, 02:22:10 am »

2:06:12 am Christopher baked a delcious Sun Fungus pie.

Change delcious to delicious.
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« Reply #27 on: August 26, 2011, 02:59:10 am »

LARRY STONECRUSH: 
Thank you for the sharpening stones.  Here have some spare ore and experince.

Change experince to experience.
Put a comma after the word 'here'.
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« Reply #28 on: January 06, 2012, 09:28:38 pm »

9:11:09 pm OUCH!! Nicodemus got an annoying popup harvesting Flowers flower patches.

Please change this so that there is only one flowers in there.  I noticed this in tw1.

411|You've purchased 1 <b>Pickaxe Blacksmith Pattern </b> for 1000000 gold!

this appears in tw2, after you buy the pickaxe blacksmith pattern.
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« Reply #29 on: January 06, 2012, 10:28:42 pm »

Both fixed, thanks for reporting.
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« Reply #30 on: January 09, 2012, 05:55:08 am »

5:54:35 am OGazentner broke a Smithed Pickaxe/i>!
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« Reply #31 on: January 09, 2012, 07:40:46 am »

5:54:35 am OGazentner broke a Smithed Pickaxe/i>!

Fixed, thanks for reporting it.
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« Reply #32 on: January 19, 2012, 05:34:42 pm »

Whilst removing taps from trees in tw1, my inventory was full.  In orangeish text it said, "You don't have any empty slots! a"

This isn't a typo really, but there is a lone letter 'a' at the end, in the message.  Should that 'a' even be there?
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« Reply #33 on: January 19, 2012, 07:56:22 pm »

"You could care less about the others."

Second sentence for washing up a golden strawberry.  While it's not a typo, since you don't get the other berries when you find a golden, it's implied that you don't care about them and toss them away... which would make "You couldn't care less about the others" true.

If I could care less about them, then that means I care about them, and shouldn't be throwing them away.

Changed the message a little to make it make more sense.

Whilst removing taps from trees in tw1, my inventory was full.  In orangeish text it said, "You don't have any empty slots! a"

This isn't a typo really, but there is a lone letter 'a' at the end, in the message.  Should that 'a' even be there?
Fixed that on TW1 and TW2.  Thanks for reporting that.
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